All Comments on 'Caught by My Wife in Her Lingerie'

Why do you randomly 'surround' words with 'quotes'? It's really 'distracting'. There's a strange trend of weird formatting going on, really hope it stops. Getting editors should help with that.

Good story, but I found the use of so many unnecessary 'quotes' extremely distracting.

The indiscriminate use of ' " around words is unnecessary and detracts from the story.

The story sounds good, but the ridiculous overuse of the quotes is really off-putting.

Fair enough, as i've said elsewhere it's another of my bad habits, that i do need to address. Constructive criticism is welcome, because i do accept i'm far from perfect as a writer. I'll try to learn from the comments here.

Good, but I wish that Sexy Sandra had invited a third into the story line.

Now there's a thought! Maybe i ought to write a sequel where she does precisely that, her sister perhaps!

I'd love to see a sequel. xoxo

She will probably tell her sister all about it and invite her to join in. Then, a man.

This story was fabulous and erotic…a must read! I loved the idea that a wife could be turned on by a feminized husband and want to continue being kinky with him, but with her in full control. Great detail was enjoyed, but would have liked a longer story with more emotion drawn out. A second chapter is very much called for, as you can’t write this story and then leave it as is. Sandra has her husband right where she wants him…please write about how she leads him on her kinky adventure. To many options to consider, all with Sandra being a loving wife of course, but she can still be dominant and demanding. Possibly explore femdom, total feminization, a website documenting his feminization its photos, cfnm, threesomes, forced bi, public crossdressing, bdsm…just a few to consider. Go light femdom or go all in and have Sandra lead her husband to full feminization with new tits. Too much fun to have with the story…please continue it!