All Comments on 'Caught in the Light Ch. 02'

In spite of a few flaws, I had to give the story 5 stars for the perfect ending!

Like the first part, you are great at plotting, but you need to work on writing technique. Some scenes need a bit more description in order to create a better picture in the reader's mind, although the scene at the end was done well. Also, there were a few typos. Regardless, overall, I loved it!

Most people do not have a "crutch" between their legs but all of have a "CROTCH".

A crutch is used by someone who needs support to walk.