All Comments on 'Caught Playing in the Bedroom'

The rush to start the sex has resulted in an average story.

In this case, less is not more.

The premise is good, the confusing shower day dream interrupting confusing then rush to climax. Keep writing as your imagination is good just need more character or scene building in the story.

What a sad man, so bereft of attention from his wife he has to masturbate to his SIL's clothing. Always find that sad.