All Comments on 'Caught Red Handed Pt. 04'

Well this one just took a different and unwelcome turn.

You are one of my favourite authors, each story is well plotted and slowy easy into hard, satisfying sex scenes. Thanks for sharing your work

This excellent. I love how she’s sissifying him. Maybe since he’s a buttslut now she can introduce chastity?

I accidentally started on this chapter, so I’m going to go back and read all chapters in order. I always look out for your stories because your are in my top 5 favorite authors on literotica along with Quixerotic1, icedragonmo3, jackie_em, and DickMarks.

Along with this story, I do wish ‘All In Pt. 01’ and ‘The Hunt’ would get another chapter.

I wish you the best with your creative mind

Love it so far, except the evolve story line... To confusing to add it and honestly I think your readers enjoy the relationships between straight guy and dominant trans girls over weird super hero talk ...

Its intresting how you link the world to your other series but the whole evole thing is strange in both stories. It doesn't seem to add too much but im guessing at some point both the principal and amanda will be revealed as evolve but that seems very distracting from both storylines.

the evolve thing is weird but I like the romance and want to see more and I kinda want the asshole bullies to get their comeuppance

When is the next chapter coming 😩 I wanna see him with hazel ormaybe penny or anything really. Just need to know whats next for this story.

I really, really like how wholesome and heartwarming this turned. The explicit condemnation of transphobia is honestly awesome. I'd also like to see Marc become a happy transgirl too. I'm not sure how the evolve stuff works though, that kinda felt like it came out of nowhere.

It's a pity you left it like this, a beautiful romantic\kinky relationship like that deserves another couple of chapters

Can you please keep this and the high school basketball story going!

This is so hot it needs more

Marcus needs to explore who he is and the Principal can help him

And I’d love to see the head bully get his

I keep switching what I’d love to happen to him but the mane theme is him and his cohorts get court doing something but some very big guys and he those his mates under the bus to get away but they tell his mates that he’s sacrificing them to save himself and let them go and keep Ken then he finds out what it’s like to receive be a bad boys bitch on leash

Are we ever going to get more?

This so good. Hope you continue it.

GREAT story!!!! More chapters PLEASE!!!!!

Ahhhh please author, release more chapters. Im sooo invested in this, its amazing

This story is amazing. I eagerly await the next chapter. As trans myself i adore stories like this. So respectful and hot....

I would love to see this story continue. And her secretary and the other trans students get in on things too.

from Chapter 3 "I'm going to have so much fun with you, my little whore. I can't wait to bring you home to my dungeon."

OK.. I'm hooked! There's so much terrain to explore now. The other students, the secretary, the principal's dungeon.. this is a vein of gold that has to be 'mined'

5*****

Please write more chapters to this story. I need more

Brilliant story, 5-stars, I will have to go back and start reading Pt 1 to see how it unfolded, and I look forward to seeing how the rest of this story unfolds.

I love this story. I hope it continues.

Of all the stories in his wonderful universe, this is without a doubt the luckiest protagonist. the director is my favorite character. It would be a crime for this story not to have a continuation.

I agree with all the comments below. I'm wondering if Pennys friend have a bulge between there legs since they are so accepting of her.

I hope you come back and finish this soon

I also agree I think pennies friends are packing as well

I think Kennedy should help Marcus discover his feminine side and he should definitely quit the football team

This one corrects the bullying by the Principal in the first chapters that was upsettibg. A good 5.

I would suggest that in all your writing, be careful to mix up your verbiage to use similar words/meanings, rather than constantly repeating the same word or phrase. For example, in the same paragraph near the end, rather than saying "...into me .." (x2), and "... inside of me...", instead one of those could have been "... in my ass...". This applies in any story, as the repetition of exact words is distracting from the rich storyline.

I'd like to see continuing chapters though. Thanks!