All Comments on 'Cece's Cunt Bitch Ep. 01'

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LordDragonFireLordDragonFireabout 9 years ago
Needs work

This wasn't bad, but the dom/sub switch happens way too quickly. At one point, the narrator has soaked panties, but a paragraph later, she mentions she'd decided not to wear any.

The basic premise isn't bad, but neither character is developed enough to really be interesting.

It's a good start, but it needs some work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

This was a complete shit storm. Bad idea bad grammar, total shit

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