by brucewayneegypt
Using the real characters in guise surely diminishes it's erotic nature which I mentioned in your first episode. And at the same time your superfast proceeding of the incidents also reduces it's credibility which shouldn't be expected from a quality writer like you. Being a fan of you, I request you. ...please please please continue it with some modifications. Thanks and have a nice day.
Honestly the concept was interesting, but the flaw I experienced was the fake celebrity names. The author could have used the real names itself. Would have been so intimidating really.
Amazing concept. Would definitely love to have the next chapter in this series