All Comments on 'Cemetery Summons Ch. 10'

I really like your story so far, I'm just afraid it is going to go too far off track with each chapter bringing in new developments instead of explaining anything. Also, this chapter made the character of Naif a lot less likable, but then my taste is a little less toward the total unrepentant whore type. Would love to see a happy-ish type ending for this story, at least in so far as it is possible when dealing with demons.

i know you said its hard to keep coming up with new chapters, but for the next one could you try to move the story a little bit more forward because while the sex is nice, it seems like you couldnt thin of much to add so you just wrote a lot of sex scenes. otherwise, its a great story and i cant wait till the next one. haha, i check everyday to see if the next installment came out.

I like the back story it give your Story more depth. you doing a grate job.

keep up the good work!

keep up the good work. very interesting writing.

You really need to lock down the Naif/Fain names. You keep using them improperly.

enyhoo there eyes change as well fain somehow turns blue in the shower, and I think one of the two end up with different eyes for some reason (cant remember when but it dose happen) gr8 story, ;-]