by Galloglaich
Interesting so far but it feels like we are never going to get to the part when Jack frees his lovers.
It does feel like a neverending story. But probably becayse were all here waiting every month for a new chapter, rather than reading the whole story in one go.
Suspense Is a good thing, sometimes draging a story out keeps the reader interested. Though too much is a bad thing you have not reached that point in my opinion. Keep up the work.
amazing series the suspense is killing me and i hate susppense so that isnt a good thing
hey this is a great story!!! cant wait for the next chapter. keep up the good work
I'm just going to say that I've been following this since somewhere before the summer of 2010. And it's awesome. I love it.
Keep up the good work :)!
awesome series, cant wait for the next one, please do keep up the good work
I love the story , there is alot of detail and not just the sexy bits ,where do you get these names for the people very inventive. Keep writing and I will keep reading.
Double Down Dave
Oh dear god i actually care about the characters in an erotic fiction story!
Anyway nice series hope to see more of it.