All Comments on 'Century Traveler'

Great story! But 23 pages. Please break it up multiple parts in the future.

5

Another GREAT 👍 read from BurntRedstone!

WOW

I can only say that I’m looking forward to the next part of this story.

I can see why you have so many followers it was entrancing with a lot hidden till the big reveals.

4 hours of nontstop reading it was greatness, please please MORE!. Story 5 stars, characters 5 stars, sex 5 stars.

Great story; Keeping Portland Weird!

There's at least one sequel here, more likely 2 or 3; can't wait!

This is a great start to a new series.

This was pretty awesome. Is it going to be continued or was it just a story on whim?

Fantastic story and plot. So many different avenues this can go. I look forward to more Doe stories

Another great BRS tale, and hopefully one with at least one sequel (or more?). As always a terrific character-driven story that makes you want to read to the end in a single sitting. More please?

This was a good un looking forward to more.

I actually read this as an early release from amazon. This is a very unique story with many twists, not much sex but the story really did not suffer from that. A very slow paced entertaining tale 5 stars.

Another OUTSTANDING story

Wow! What else can I say? Great story

Wow that was good. Bring on the next installments!!

5 stars as usual.

So how many years will we have to wait for the next John Doe tale? Your next story is Ben, and you have Henry and Kyle on deck. My only complaint about your writing is the long gap between books.

Damn that is a GREAT story!

Amazing story!

Really entertaining piece. Hope we meet John and his pack again. Thanks for sharing.

Another homerun. Can’t wait to see where you will take us with this outstanding story.

Will there be another?

Damn, whenever I see your story, I feel like crying. You are the best, don't keep us waiting tho.

Another home run from a master story teller. Thank you and please continue this.

Awesome! Don't forget to save/protect the rest of his friends from the new "evil thing". And please, get Sasha on a leash or something. She's getting on Anna's last nerve! Yoga be damned; Anna is going to beat that child...

Great job!

A small number of mistakes calling John "Joe", but otherwise perfection.

Although I was a little surprised you never sprung a "John Dough" joke in there once he became a billionaire....

Some superb creativity and writing. The name errors(John/Joe, Deron/'Daron) were distracting but didn't really take away from the story. I read it in one sitting, so.... 5* from me.

Amazing as always. I've loved your books ever since I found the first Shepherd story. I kind of hate you a little bit for releasing a story in a whole new setting though. It's now one more added to the list of stories that I have to wait impatiently for you to add to. And no matter which one you release next, I'll still be forced to wait for you to work on the others. Ah well, it's a rather lovely problem to have.

Wow! Excellent!!

Simply awesome. Could not stop reading. Don't like being made to stop reading. I concur with the wish for a sequel

Absolutely fantastic story as always very happy you left it open for more chapters you sir are a genius

More! I have been missing Shepherd but this has me super stoked for a chapter 2! Also chapter 3, 4, 5...

A absolutely superb story! I am looking forward to the continuing story.

Spectacular. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. 5 Stars.

Nice job of creating an interesting universe - Looking forward eagerly to Part 2, Soon, please!

One of my pet peeves (and I have many...) is when a story centres around a well known phenomenon in popular culture but doesn't recognise it as a 'thing', like vampire, werewolf and zombie movies that have no recognition of the symptoms presenting themselves in those affected. Now when you got to the part in this tale where John (Joe?) was bitten by the dying 'werewolf' and no one made the instinctive but unbelievable leap of logic to exclaim "Werewolf!" even humorously, then I was immediately liking the story less. But I stuck with it and I'm glad I did, because by the time I finished reading this I really couldn't care less as the whole premise seemed to fit the story well. Spiritual entities inhabiting peoples bodies in different forms, adding supernatural powers and extra instincts and egos is fine to me. I'm also hoping that this will have sequels to continue the tale even though that will make your other story continuations slower to be created, I'm willing to make that tough sacrifice, I'm such a trooper.

Great story, keep it up BRS.

Holy crap, that was a amazing start of an start and what I hope to be a long series of stories, I couldn’t put it down after I was started. I really hope that you have planed more chapter, because could be fantastic.

Well done, and thank you for sharing your work with us.

Interesting twist on typical tropes...

At least they don't sparkle in the sun! lol! (*That* author deserves to be beaten for doing that horrible disservice to vampire mythology!)

Outstanding! Hope too see more about John in the future.

More of this story please

Please, please tell me this is "Chapter 1".

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I was so happy when I discovered the Author had submitted this story, being my favorite Author of course. Thank youand are we to expect a Chapter 2? Sounded like the end of the season Cliff Hanger to me! 5 BIG FATS BLAZING NOVA STARS!

Taken into another world of Burntredstone what a glorious feeling. Excellent read thanks for sharing this with us

Great story! Keep it coming!

richard

Loved it as I usually do. I wasn't sure if you were going to go Angelic or Fae with the white light bit. Good characters, engaging situations.

And as usual, leaving us wanting more.

Simply amazing!

At 23 Lit pages long I thought this was going to be a complete story and, while it is, the death of Prescott and the aftermath means others are still after him so I'm hoping there will be sequels. Please.

What else can one expect from a BRS story. A decent plot, great characters, sex and well written throughout. Thanks and a definite 5 ⛤

One of the best stories published here!

Loving this story

Nicely done.

Thank you.

L77

Where can I get a pint of whatever it is you're drinking? The effects seem absolutely superb and your imagination and characterisation outstanding. I'd say keep up the good work but that seems superfluous.

well....damn! got caught up in the story quickly, and wasted an afternoon. GREAT job, BR! it's fun getting lost in your worlds, with all the details you include. John was kind of Stanley-esque, but in a completely unique and different storyline. Thanks... looking forward to part deux!

Another 5-star WOW, this story again proves that you are very capable of writing in the magical/supernatural world, much like your Satyr series. Had a question though, regarding a couple of times that John was referred to as Joe, ... was that a typo for his sir-name of Doe, or was the name 'Joe' a left over from a first draft name that was later changed to John? And thank you for leaving this tale wide open for another BurntRedstone series, ... the John Doe series? or the Wolf series? Anyway, I loved it, thank you for sharing, it was a lovely story. ;-) TTFN

And yet another absolute 5 star story. Thank you

All I can say is......MORE!

Damn you! Do you know how tired I am after binging this. Lol 😂 I truly hope this becomes your next epic series.

Awesome story with the hope of more to come. What could be better? Thanks

A new shepherd as Ben's story is approaching finale? I hope there's more to come.

DITTO!

Man you can write! Great story, great twist on an old story line. I will be letting some friends that like werewolf and vampire type stories know about it. Looking forward to more.

The talk about his mother. What is about Sutomi? These are the rasons to 4* ohterwise 5* . Maybe a secound chapter?

WE WANT MORE! WE WANT MORE! Oh, sorry for shouting! :)

I soooooo.......enjoyed this story and was extremely happy that the possibility of a sequel is out there. I would like to be able to tell you that I read everything in one session, but life has a way of getting in the way and it took two sessions. GREAT IMAGINATION!!!!

I hope it will not take too long for the sequel. Excellent work.

"A tale I've been waiting for the right moment to publish." He says. Makes me wonder what other tricks you have up your sleeve. Outstanding as always Redstone.

Great story! I can’t wait for the second one…please let there be one

Couldn't stop reading once I started. Absolutely top notch story. 5* obviously.

Hopefully there will be a part 2 of this fabulous tale

I'm looking soon forward to the second part!!! There are some unanswered question.

Great story, great writing, by the way,

Seriously great read. I sooooo hope you are planning a sequel for this.

All I can say is: Thanks!

Absolutely 5 stars! MORE!!! PLEASE!!!

Please write more chapters. That was phenomenal.

Fabulous story that hopefully has at least one or two more parts. There are more characters to develop and you’ve left us drooling for more.

Truly an overwhelming 5* effort that treats us all to your great talent and the effort you put into this fascinating literature. Please keep it up.

Great job. More please.

Amazing as always! PLEASE tell me this story is going to continue?!

This was awesome!

What a tangle of details to meld together. I can’t wait for the next chapter of this character. Or will it be chapters? All the better if or when it becomes an ongoing story line. Well done, well done!

A very enjoyable read. Hopefully, more pages will come. Reading it helped me through a very painful night recovering from a full knee replacement without using the Oxycodon they said I would need. So thank you. Funny how letting your mind go while laying with an ice pack and a good read will overcome a bit of burning pain. :-)

Great story from a great story teller! I sincerely hope that a part II is on the way at some point, there were a lot of threads left hanging that would make for a great continuation.

Brilliant as ever.

Bravo... this story was highly entertaining. 5 stars

I echo what the others have said - great story, and please please please continue it! Don't get me wrong - it's an amazing story as it stands, I just think it could stand to have a chapter two. ;)

But, whether you continue it or not, thank-you for a wonderful read!

'nough said

5*'s too wish there were more to give

txcracker

Fantastic story once again from a a great author and I look for wood the next chapter of John Doe

OMGosh yhis was an awesome story. I sure hope there is a part 3 3 4 5 6 well u get it. Thanks for all ur hard work it is enjoyed and appreciated.

I almost lost my job reading this, but damn was it worth it. 5 stars hands down. ✋

Absolutely amazing story.

So compelling! Can’t wait for more!

Wow!

Now I’m scared of how many years it’ll take to get the next part… please don’t keep us waiting too long.

As always you are a Legend man!

AZ

Dayum! This is one hell of a story!

I have read and liked all your stories, but I would put this one in the lower half. John was written as an very unlikeable character. The storyline was extremely convoluted and I felt like I was being dragged along. There was very little emotion in this story. As with all your stories, it was well written, but it just didn't have any spark for me. Not sure what I should be looking forward to in additional chapter. Sorry.

Mr. Redstone.....

Excellent imagination and storyline..... I see a few more adventures with these characters and their relationships. Thank you for your talent, time and love of writing.

Another great story from my favorite author! I look forward to a follow up to this one as well!

Saw BurntRedstone...expected a really really good story...got just what I expected!!!

Up to your usual brilliant standard of storytelling- thank you!

Wow...just wow!

I wish there were 6 stars.

Amazing story, written by an incredible author.

Thank you.

4* not as good as your previous stories

Once again I'm amazed at your writing. Please consider a second chapter!

Hey BurntRedstone…..WOW…..thanks for a wonderful read. Sure hope there’s a follow up in the future. As usual your story telling is awesome. Thanks

As is normal, brilliant writing.

In the middle, you seemed lost, as a writer. You kept throwing in details which felt spurious, almost as if you felt the need to insert the detail or you needed to to foreshadow.

It weakened the plot, but you followed up with a fairly solid ending.

Long, but good story. Assuming there will be a second chapter>>??