by hexlygun
This story is more impossible than me running a 2 minute mile.
Not a bad story, could be very good if you Really think it through and draw it out.
Make it hang together and seem possible, rather than “wham-Bam-Thank you mam”!
firstly, he's never nude. So no cfnm. Secondly, he's a show-off not in the least really embarassed never mind humiliated. Don't attribute with wrong keywords.
HE IS NAKED at the end? Cfnm doesn't have to involve humiliation.
Anyway, story was alright, could've been better. A lap of a pool = a length. Also, pulling a muscle requires surgery and is a lot worse than cramp
Unrealistic scenarios, how will your dick fall down by gravity? .. secondly where is cfnm and humiliation in this story?