All Comments on 'CFNM: The College Saga Pt. 03'

by That_CFNM_Guy

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Great story line

Part 1, 2, 3 are terrific teasers cannot wait for more.

Jenny_CJenny_Cabout 9 years ago
Great Start

Great beginning! Can’t wait to read more. There’s far too few stories of this type on Literotica. My compliment at doing a great job at drawing out the eroticism, like where you give little hints early in the story of what is to come later – and hopefully, what will cum later too. My only criticism is that some of your dialog was a little awkward, but that will come with practice. One suggestion to spice it up a bit:: give the guy a big dick -- but that's just a personal preference from a girl's perspective.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
this is a good beginning.

I agree with Jenny_C. I look forward to reading more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

If the nudity and double standards are no big deal to Chrissy, and if she really cares for Chris, why doesn’t she prove it by letting him explore her naked body completely, repeatedly and in detail? It doesn’t matter to her- right?

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