All Comments on 'Ch. 01: The Evolution Begins'

interesting where this is going. More wives than you would think, would like to see their husband take a cock.

Thank you for your comment. The story definitely has a few twists and turns coming and this may be one of them. I’m at 4 chapters now and should wrap it up on the 6th chapter.

I’m enjoying this first installment, and going in for the 2nd chapter. Well written, with a nice storyline, and tempo… and the hint of upcoming sex is exciting!!

Very good start!!

You created a realistic scenario that could be taking place in almost any married couples home at any time. The decision to make them start as equals and deciding together what they would want to possibly try sexually was a nice change from one partner badgering the other to try something different that has been brought up, discussed and denied many times. I think your storyline works and it’s tempo and topics are excellent. I look forward to moving on the chapter 2.

Thank you all for spending the time to read and comment with your thoughts on this chapter. I appreciate your support, there is more to come.

Really well done! Not jumpy - and fairly relatable. Thanks