All Comments on 'Chance Meeting'

A fun business meeting; maybe more between the two lovers.

I like the story, but a person "pedals" not "peddles" as well as "pedaling" mot "peddling", Mistakes like those detract from the story.

A fun story.

Good, but the end was too abrupt and spoilt the whole thing.

Good premise, terrible story. Sorry.

my oversized Channel tote bag

her butt giggled

She got down from the stationery bike

" I rolled over onto my back and let her slither down my naked body teasing me with her tongue. I closed my eyes and enjoyed every minute of what was happening." That's it? No details, Boooooo!

And, wow, do you need a proofreader editor.

You wrote:

"I stepped up the pace and began to peddle harder." PEDDLE means to sell. PEDAL is what's done n a bite.

"...revealing her beautify breasts." You mean BEAUTIFUL not BEAUTIFY (which means to make beautiful).

"Wow, that fantasy was so real I stopped peddling and tried to catch my breath." PEDDLE vs PEDAL which you did again later too.

"I talked with the bar tender..." BARTENDER is one word.

One star.

It all seems a bit frantic, just a wham bang thank you mam kind of story, would have preferred a little more build up getting to know you.