All Comments on 'Chanel and Ashley, A Love Story'

Very interesting and quietly sensual. Looking forward to where you will take this storyline/your two characters/us. Like Chanel a bit on edge. Nicely done.

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WRONG CATEGORY!!!!

This should be in the Celebrity category (Even though they're MINOR celebrities at best.

Like your protagonist, you come in quickly and pretty much take over the stage. You have us all wrapped up (rapt?) and ready to follow where ever this may lead.

Thank you for sharing your story. Looking forward to where you take Chanel & Ashley.

Very good story. I enjoyed the attention to detail and descriptions, you can close your eyes and almost visualize what is happening.

Great start. A lot going in such a short time. Looking forward to reading the rest (I'm doing that now).

Girls are enchanting and so for men hard to get a grip on ...... Throwing the men of balance was a good start ...... No words needed just all smiles