All Comments on 'Change of Control Ch. 02'

I am the author and somewhat new to writing. I have an entire series planned for these two. I am learning so much regarding style, grammar, punctuation, and the art of better writing.

In the meant time, I wanted to say thank you to all for the positive comments and especially the rating! I truly can't believe it. I did not set out to write for good ratings, but it is very rewarding to work hard and see positive results. I will continue to strive for better.

Thank you!

Wow! Scorching hot! So very very sexy, lucky lucky lady. 5 stars.

Tess (uk)

Good premise.

Still lacking much in the way of touching her by him, or any of him by her.

Could have used comments/suggestions by the watchers.

Four stars.