All Comments on 'Change of Life Ch. 12'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
ARE YOU THAT STUPID,KICK HER ASS OUT

SIMPLE COMMON SENSE,KICK HER DUMB ASS OUT WITH MANDY.THERE ARE MORE WOMAN IN THE SEA .MAYBE YOU ARE THE DUMB ONE,FOR PUT UP WITH B/S.YOU LOOKING MORE LIKE SISSY BOY PAULLY EVERY MINUTE.GIVE HER A SUIT CASE AND SAY GOODBYE,THAT NOT HARD.YOU DON'T NEED A WHORE OR A ICE QUEEN FOR A WIFE, WHEN SOMEONE SELF IS GIVING THEM ORDERS.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Consequentually Closer

Congrat's - very stimulating and entertaining!! Also a breath of reality from the husbands perspective - its appreciated and believeable at this juncture of the story.

When will he realize Mandy mastered his wife before Mandy screwed him and set the stage for everything so far. Good buddy Paulie appears to have been in this also from the start. Bud appears to be toast as does the marriage.

Will there be the consequence the story cries out for?

(don't be offended but please consider a proofreader and or editor as correctly spelled but wrong words throw of (off) flow and appreciation of your abilities). regards

gizzmo301gizzmo301about 19 years ago
Nice

is is a great story, you can feel what Bud is going through. Can't wait for the next chapter

gizzmo301gizzmo301about 19 years ago
Nice

is is a great story, you can feel what Bud is going through. Can't wait for the next chapter

gizzmo301gizzmo301about 19 years ago
Nice

is is a great story, you can feel what Bud is going through. Can't wait for the next chapter

gizzmo301gizzmo301about 19 years ago
great

good story, you take a husband aubmissive wife, a wimp male friend and his slut wife. WoW Bud has his work cut out to keep Shirl. I don't see Bud saving this marriage but there should be some fun revenge against Mandy over this.... She is the kind of slut that will cause everyone a lot of grief, maybe Paul will get some balls and help do something about her.

gizzmo301gizzmo301about 19 years ago
great

good story, you take a husband aubmissive wife, a wimp male friend and his slut wife. WoW Bud has his work cut out to keep Shirl. I don't see Bud saving this marriage but there should be some fun revenge against Mandy over this.... She is the kind of slut that will cause everyone a lot of grief, maybe Paul will get some balls and help do something about her.

gizzmo301gizzmo301about 19 years ago
great

good story, you take a husband aubmissive wife, a wimp male friend and his slut wife. WoW Bud has his work cut out to keep Shirl. I don't see Bud saving this marriage but there should be some fun revenge against Mandy over this.... She is the kind of slut that will cause everyone a lot of grief, maybe Paul will get some balls and help do something about her.

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