All Comments on 'Changes Ch. 01'

I love abducted family stories. You have established a body

of content without a lot of needless detail. I do not suggest any storyline, but leave it up to you to propell us

into situations that aren't commonplace in similar stories

of this nature. Loving it so far.

and not enough set up. Also needs editing. But it was a decent start.

please finish this series

Keep this up it is great!