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WhoGivesAShitWhoGivesAShit8 months ago

Really good job with this story. It works well to grab attention and put the reader’s emotions on the victim, perpetrators, and the little manipulator. I like it, please don’t stop.

ThisFNGThisFNG8 months agoAuthor

Thank you much @WhoGivesAShit! :)

The final two chapters are currently in review purgatory and should be posted in the next 24-48 hours. I hope you like how it wraps up. There is also the 'woman-scorned' theme you'll need to watch out for ;)

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

The premise of a 19 year old, and a 47 year old is a bit of a stretch, but you’ve made this pretty interesting, I think you could do a lot with this, so let’s see where you go from here. Thanks for your time and effort. KS

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