All Comments on 'Chapter 5: Sins of the Father'

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Fantagasm 11 months ago

This was so very hot, and I am loving this series, but if I could make a suggestion, maybe get your work proofread before you publish it. I noticed a couple typos in there. Didn't take away from the enjoyment though! And I'd be happy to proof your work if you DM 😏

HasdrubalClitomachus 10 months ago

Looking forward to more

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