by suckandfuck
When writing "Fan Fiction" [ which is what this is called in other venues, there's a ton of it with STAR TREK themes ] it can be hard to capture the characters. Yours was pretty good, although this is the first one I've read. I will likely go and read them all though. Keep it up - oh, and btw, I am also a LIT author and you might find some of my work to your liking. I will send you a PVT message too.