All Comments on 'Charlotte's Mistake Ch. 02'

"principal" is a person. Don't rely on spell checker

another part would be nice

Great story. How about the next part?

Thanks for pointing out the mistake, I'm always receptive to criticisms, though you could have phrased it more constructively. By the way, if you found one grammatical mistake in 3.4K words of self edited text, you can assume the writer hasn't relied just on spell checker.

Hope it didn't offend you so much that you couldn't get off to it lol

Thanks @anonymous for pointing out the mistake. By the way, if you found one grammatical mistake in 3.4K words of self-edited text, you can assume the writer hasn't just relied on spell checker.

Hope it didn't offend you so much that you couldn't get off to it lol

It would be great to see some pussy expansion like an hyperpussy linked to her libido or similar

Really nice story

More please