All Comments on 'Chastised Pt. 01'

Your vocabulary is very good for a 11 year old. Well done, but this is adult site and I don't think you belong here.

What a stupid story.

PS: you should take it to cuckold.com, it will fit great over there.

Call the police.

I know that this is a nonconsent story story but she's just evil.

HOOOT

Typical. Give an inch and lose a mile. He should just call the police, claim sexual assault and have her arrested. Police remove cage and all is well. Since this is non consent, guess she non-consented to a free stay with the state. Overall well written but don't think I want to know anymore unless or until he's free of her.

"Your vocabulary is very good for a 11 year old."

Nice sentence, nothing funnier than unrecognized irony. Haha

Awesome story! Can't wait for more chapters!

One can only assume that this is going to end vey badly for her or just devolve into a fairy tale.

A good start and a 5 from me. Don't be put off by negative comments - nearly all from "anonymous" posters, too scared to use their literati pseudonym for fear their stories ( if indeed they've written any), will be criticised.

Time to get the law in on this call the cops from work and charge the slut with cruelty then go for the divorce lawyer and get rid of the whore because she will soon be facing around on him and expect him to clean her that up after each session with her new boyfriend time to move on

I liked it, but we all know she’s be cuckold him pretty soon, while he’s getting Super frustrated. But Neil be happy.

As for the other Anonymous writer, sounds like he’s got a thing for 11 year olds possibly..

AWESOME start to this story. Definitely nedds more.

He wakes up in the night, ties her up, uses her thumb on the app, and gets to the hardware store where he buys what he needs to take it off. Then, he bring home stuff to deny her until she is ready to be his.

is this guy a fucking moron that deserves this? has he never heard of amazon to order the tools he needs, or just knock the bitch out and use thumb to unlock her phone, shut down the app then break the phone. then tie her up and torture for the safe combo..

Like other comments, I am asking the question is this guy as dumb as the author is making him out to be? , if he wants this treatment that's great but if not he could be out and have dumped her before we got to the end of the page.

Remarkably stupid, and I'm someone who likes kinky sex games.

If she likes nonconsensual games, beat her until she gives in. Or until she's unconscious.

Love it. Looking forward to the next part.