All Comments on 'Chastity's Road to Fulfilment'

by creamsoda25

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Bill669JBill669Jover 1 year ago

Nice story. Bad start. Good ending and a lot of good sex inbetween

creamsoda25creamsoda25over 1 year agoAuthor

Thanks so much for the comment Bill669. I probably should have left a lot of the beginning out, or in some other way grabbed the reader. I can see how it got off to a slow start. I'm sure lots of people read the first page and abandoned it.

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