All Comments on 'Intro to Slavery Prologue'

Make this a series.

Do not rush the storyline!

You are doing a damn good job!

Somewhat simplistic, after reading the first half, she caved too easily, I expected more as the story went on, you had her, you could have gone a few different ways, but you seemed to go for plain vanilla at the end.

Kinda basic, but not a bad start. It would have added another layer if John and Caden were close friends and there was a feeling of guilt at betraying his best friend, but I'm still interested to see where this goes next.

great start