All Comments on 'Cheating with Husband'

LOL, look at this simp's profile. Says he's a black man from India. To be honest you're more likely to be some 400 lb incel with two inches between his legs.

Thanks for the humor though....

terrible plot and grammer

i had to stop reading half way through. you need an editor badly. you keep referring to him as her. talk about him taking your mom? wtf? i would suggest getting someone that speaks English to help with this. this looks like something done in google translate!

WTF? Unreadable

“Till then I will kill the pussy worm.” WTF?

I actually had fun reading this. It was like putting a comical puzzle together.

Wow, five stars for a very entertaining story. Google says that the original language is Hindi. If google was used for the translation, I think that they need some improvement. While I had a very fun time laughing, I don't expect that the author made the errors.

Seems like English is your second language, so there's a bit of an excuse here... but man, this was nearly unreadable.

That was painful to read. If English is not your first language. Please take Advil one of the people willing to edit your story for you.

The horrible writing is a perfect match for this horrible story.

You need to go back to the drawing board with this story. Hard to read at all. Maybe read some more good stories and get a better idea. This was ugly.

Very confusing. You jump between him/ her and who knows who? So you really don't know what is going on and the use of unfamiliar words leaves one wondering "what"?

You are not ready to post a story in LW.