All Comments on 'Checkmate Ch. 02'

I think body alteration should be allowed for the slaves, would be hot if some of them had to get humiliating piercings or even matching tattoos to remind them of the time they lost

Please have some small penis humiliation for a forfeit

It would be à big help with s summary of the persons in the text with describtions of them

I'll stick a list of characters up at the beginning of the next chapter - there are a lot of characters :D

Thanks everyone for the input! Some great ideas :D

Is this mostly finished or are your writing it fresh. still waiting to find out how the games go.

Still hope you will continue the story.