All Comments on 'Cheerleader and the Peeper'

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ShmiShmi7 months ago

Very well written and enjoyable story. The perfect epilogue would have been Chloe ending up as somebody’s lesbian bitch who forced her to engage in public nude dares so she could get off.

Campus77Campus777 months ago

I really liked this one. It had everything. Good story line and great character development. A happy ending worked in well. Wonder how Brian and Shawna's relationship worked out. Thanks!

AG31AG317 months ago

It's not my thing, and it's long, so I didn't finish it. But what I read was perfectly paced in realistically presented. I believed Shawna was real.

No stars because I don't give stars unless it's a genre I ought to like.

Camguy4funCamguy4fun7 months ago

A terrific story with a great ending. Glad she got together with Brian. And love the idea that she ended up stripping.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Good story. Maybe a chapter 2 where Brain and her date in college then after college they get married and she only strips for her husband

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Finally a fantasy where the protagonist gets revenge on the antagonist.

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Bathroom Handy is now published. Mickey and Jordan get back at Queen Bee Monique after she humiliates Jordan. Category: Nonconsent/Reluctance