All Comments on 'Cheerleader's Revenge'

by Bane

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Very good

Well done. You took it a different direction than I ever expected. I look forward to your next story.

bdsmbillbdsmbillabout 16 years ago
Epilog?

The epilogue seemed to be part of a different story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Epilogue

The epilogue refers to another of the stories in the Cheerleader series and makes sense if you have read the other stories

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Not Bad, Bane

Not bad at all. I definitely didn't see this coming.

Now, let's get that coed fucked, shall we? ;)

Kiss, WTBS

MilkChocolateAmazonMilkChocolateAmazonabout 16 years ago
Just desserts methinks

Very well done. Revenge most certainly is sweet!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
EXCELLENT

EXCELLENT

TsukiKitTsukiKitabout 15 years ago
I love Robert

Revenge is best served cold!!!!

Big bro always knoews what to do, I guess!!! The plan was genius and wicked!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Excellent

Loved the whole series. Glad those fuckers got what they deserved!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
love this and love the ending good for her

I was really impressed by your writing style it was hot nice build good pace.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
So Right...

Vindictive, mean spirited, cruel, and wrong on so many levels but still absolutely justified... I absolutely loved it. And I'm usually one who sees revenge as unconstructive and usually harmful. However, I was enjoying the revenge too much to really get turned on by the sex. That didn't bother me, really, though.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
YES

Perfect. Rarely do I see these rat bastards ever get their comeuppance. Thank you for this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Awesome!!

Nothing better than a nice revenge, glad they all got what they deserved.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

omg this was so unexpected i love it but did stone, stu, and the rest of them go to jail ? i wanna know what happened to them

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Better than the rest of these stories. Still very incomplete. Did the wedding take place? Was there no other retribution to the other cheerleaders or football players besides a little humiliation? How did the doctor wind up in jail?

Mfj

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