All Comments on 'Chemical SeXXX Pt. 02'

Really love this type of story. Please write more.

Why does every writer seem to need to dramatize perversion?

1 star.

Perversion......really?!? People having sex isn’t perversion, it’s people enjoying each other, from what I can see of the chapter index, actual perversion happens in the next chapter. I defy anyone to tell me that incest is not perversion. It’s a hard No for me and I’ll be skipping that chapter, so thanks to the author for the advance warning.

As for the “dramatisation” that’s all part of the fantasy aspect of the story, artistic license call it what you will. I mean the odds of an 18 year old guy managing to get hazardous chemicals out of a secure facility aren’t exactly great (I hope so anyway). Whilst there have been lots of scientific advances made by accident the odds of producing the effect achieved are beyond astronomical. Or maybe you could just lighten up a little bit?

Thanks to fortytworight for a very enjoyable story so far.

Tess (uk)