All Comments on 'Chemistry'

Horrible spelling and punctuation. The repetitive questions made it totally unreadable.

The pure one-sidedness of this story, in addition to the annoying repetitive questions - of course she can feel your teeth as you nibble on her nipple - make this story unreadable for me. :(

Please, please get a dictionary and use it. anon jerry

After the third Can you.... I couldn't even finish reading it. The beginning started out nice and then it just got annoying.