by Subleglover
Good premise.
Lots of sex. But every time there's a sexual interaction it happens -- and is over -- much too quickly.
With her taking charge, why no extended edging of his cock with dialog to accompany it. And getting him to the edge -- and keeping him there -- denying him permission to cum.
And you really need to learn how to spell MASTURBATE. It's not mastErbate.
Four stars.
Simply amazing, beautiful and fantastic 🥰
Too close to my fantasy in fact I don't know what to add to make it better. Simply perfect for me 😊😭
But I really think now after reading comments below indeed if sex and orgasm time could have been extended with addition of teasing words and denial then it would have been a masterpiece
Good premise.
Too rushed.
Needed a lot more making out/touching each other/kissing each other before moving ahead to cock entering pussy.
Once she found out that he was a virgin there was soooooo much that could have happened that didn't.
She never taught him about her body and told/showed him what she wanted to do to/with it.
No breast play.
Seemed in a rush to be over and done with.
One star.