All Comments on 'Childhood Best Friend Ch. 01'

by Dash91830

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

That was some seriously dumb shit.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I struggled through to the end hoping there would be something to redeem this, but there wasn’t. Poorly written from an unusual point of view, and not redeemed by an interesting story line. Shame.

Jdavis77Jdavis77almost 2 years ago
Soo

I remember one comment on a different story you said you write about the things you want happened to you but why. So you want to be cuckold pissed on and be a bitch with no back bone but again I ask why

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Lmao he chose tyrone, the most stereotypical black guy name for the cuckolding part

muskyboymuskyboyalmost 2 years ago

Not a story, not even 1/2 a story. Jake is a dumb shit and Sydney is a sick bitch. Zero affection or emotion, and definitely not an Erotic Coupling story. FTDS before you submit!

Dash91830Dash91830almost 2 years agoAuthor
He didn’t actually get cuckolded

If you actually read until the end, Jake made it perfectly clear that he doesn’t want it, so Sidney cancelled her plan with Tyrone. That shows her love for him since she willingly backed out of her plan to fuck another guy, for the sake of her boyfriend.

Dash91830Dash91830almost 2 years agoAuthor
I do enjoy the getting pissed on though

My girlfriend never raped me but she does piss on my face and in my mouth.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Not slightly erotic, you seem to have some deep issues and should look for professional help. And please stop writing, there’s a lot of equally sad people out there that could be encouraged by this sickness.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

You have some deep mental issue, you should see a psychologist

AnonymousAnonymous25 days ago

I have an idea for a new story:

This college girl ends up sharing the same room as her enemy and as the story goes on, the two slowly fall for each other. The main girl has a best friend and has a crush on him but is too nervous to tell him. One night when the main girl's at her dorm, she and her enemy eventually tell each other how they feel and have sex. Later on both girls get into a threesome with the male best friend, who's a stud, and they all have the night of their lives.

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