by StarryHorizon
Would lie to see a sequel to some of your other stories. But this was good too. Hope we get a chapter 2.
I'm not into incess or I would have given this story a 5. I wish the same actions could have happened between friends.
After reading this and the author's similar works (all of them have this theme), I'd like to see a story where the idiot takes charge of her life by:
-Beating the daylights out of her worthless drunk dad
-Take a morning after pill...or terminating any pregnancy
-Beat dad some more. Severely.
Not sure if it was done on purpose but i prefer when the hair and eye color of the female is described to us, heck i even enjoy reading about pink nipples lol
Great story with realistic sounds and feelings. Almost as if I was right there in the sleeping bag with you.
I wish it was me in her place.I would love to feel my daddy's cum inside me.
While the story flows rather well for the most part, you seem to take a couple of things not into account which takes away from things slightly.
1 it's dark therefore she couldn't see the color of his penis.
2 you had her shift so when he was thrusting against her he'd have been grinding against her leg at one point (or at least that's what it sounded like.
Otherwise, not a bad story.