All Comments on 'Chloe's Introduction Pt. 02'

A great follow up, darling Chloe. I loved this, and it ought to do at least as well as part 1. 💕💕

My goodness you’re an exciting writer. Looking forward to the next episode. Well done Chloe!

Thank you for this exciting read, Miss Chloe. What a wonderful story!

Miss Chloe, well done, truly one of the most erotic stories, I haver ever read, more please.

That was all kinds of wonderful. A very commendable follow up. I think I'm going to have to change my stylist. Five well deserved stars.

Very much enjoying this so far. I appreciate the the characters are three-dimensional and not just cardboard cutouts.

Loving the follow up, it is hot!!

Looking forward to next part,

Please keep up the good work.

Hugs xx

An excellent follow-up. You should be very proud of this story so far. Loving the characters you've created and the eroticism of the situation they're in. Also enjoying the sub boss dynamic too (how long before Chloe has control of Edwina too!).

Hope you have more planned as this has been a fantastic start. Great job. 5 stars!

Brillant read ,,you need more!

Must book an appointment soon….giggles

Love it Chloe

You are brilliant with words

June

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Thank you Pixie, you've been amazing, an inspiration and a great friend.

Cleeve, many thanks for the complement. More is on the way.

Mny thanks Sumi - and thank you for the service you provide me.

Anon (1) - many thanks, i hope you enjoy the next instalment (in a couple of weeks!).

AliceGee - thank you! you would be most welcome at Edwina's special sessions!

Charmadillo - thank you. Glad you're enjoying the characters, there's certainly more work to be done on some of them.

Hi Beth - many thanks - next part probably start of November.

Anon (2) - many thanks. I'm not sure what is going to happen between Eddie and Chloe just yet - i think that particular element will be a slow-burn and may come out in future stories. I still have to figure out how the absent Tracey fits back in!

Mia darling, you are certainly one of the story's inspirations. More on the way!

You would be most welcome at one of Edwina's sessions June! Thoroughly enjoying your own very sexy stories!

Part 3 please or another tale.

So well written and I enjoyed the fact that there was story line behind it all. But always the erotic aspects were there. The punishment scene gave me goosebumps. Very hot Chloe!

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The only issue I have with this story, is trying to wrap my mind around the fact that this is chloe_switch's first foray into writing erotica. The themes are quite advanced and sophisticated, as is the pacing and the detail of the characters and environments. chloe_switch did note that Pixiehoff helped edit, so that certainly does help explain the preternatural polish of this excellent debut. That said: Bring on part 3 chloe. I can't wait to see what happens next. 🍿🍿🍿🍿🍿

I loved reading this very much!

The first chapter might of been teasing of what was to come, but this was written in such a way that it the 3rd chapter is going to being even greater. You’re very talented and I look forward to reading anything you produce.

Chloe, I'd been looking forward to the follow-on from part 1, and it was everything I hoped for. You have a well-honed awareness of the sensuality of receiving (and giving?) a shampoo.

Echoing a recent comment, I am certain that you are no newcomer to erotic writing, and I could easily believe that you have written professionally. The narrative demonstrates a mastery of composition, pacing, flow, and above all manipulating the tension and power dynamic between the characters. And of course, maintaining the expectation in the mind of the reader. The time overlap between parts 1 and 2 is a nice touch.

My only disappointment came when there was no more to read, but I dare say there will be a part 3, and .....

This is a wonderful 5 star story that has great potential with well crafted characters. Top shelf entertainment that provides excitement and drama. As a suggestion maybe get a little bit darker in the dom and sub relationships. The added darker control and submission could make this a over the top event. Cheers

WOW!... Chapter-2 Is Hot,,, Yes!

Hallo Chloe!

Queen Jackie and I simply love this story, it makes me want to have my hair done, or at the very least share your stories with my hairdresser... she's a 45 year old African American hair-stylist specializing in black womens hair... I think she likes me because I'm Queen Jackie's slave, and I have offered to eat her pussy!

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[You understand what we are about to do?] _ I know at times I seem a little too BDSM for some women, but when I was working as a lesbian prostitute... just like in chapter-1, when Chloe asked Mia before chopping off her hair... nothing I ever did to any woman was without her full consent, whether I was being paid by her Mistress, or she was paying me herself!

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[For those who've accused me of teasing, well...I hope you enjoy!] _ Teasing?... No, I don't think so... Queen Jackie says you were just laying the background, for your character's as all good Authors do, and I agree..

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[Come dear slut, I'm thirsty. I expect you are too.] _ When the Black Queen asks if I'm thirsty and tells me drink up, slut!... It's not yummy warm wine I'm drinking! :-)

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[The long leather paddle.] _ At the group home our Schulleiterin preferred using the (Lederband-Strafe) for punishing it's a leather strap, about one meter in length and ten centimeters across, with perforations and a wooden-handle, that could be used with both-hands when she wanted your attention..

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In case you're interested, I sent you a private message through Literotica's author box!

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Thank-you 5-More Stars and 5-Yummy Orgasms..

The Black Queen and Gay Kat!

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Ch2 really got into the meat of it!

Great writing and fab story telling; ch1 had the right amount of scene setting and teasing but ch2 was amazing and described some awesome personal grooming arrangements. Let’s hope Tracey’s role in this is not now excluded but where will she fit in?? An easy 5*’s

Wiz100 - Tracey is, so far the loose thread across all of my stories. I do need to deal with her soon.

Hallo Chloe, and thank you... your message is loud and clear!

That was a jump into a ici cold water ….. ok having some fantasy, fine, but your being paddled naked tattooed pierced collared is some to take in …… soirée is a fine word for the real attention all the girls are in need ….. love the bob, oh this style looks extraordinary and now a tight bubble perm , that would be perfection …… smile …… Lovely read 💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝 👩🏻‍🦰👩🏻‍🦰👩🏻‍🦰👩🏻‍🦰👩🏻‍🦰👩🏻‍🦰👩🏻‍🦰👩🏻‍🦰

This is an incredible introduction so far. I’m excited to read on and find out how deep this rabbit hole goes.

Love it.