by Ophelia_Coque
Wow ! Very lovely ! You did a wonderful job of slowly building the action and captured the innocence of a first time experience.....
Hi Ophelia
This is a beautiful story- very sensuous and it had a true genuine feeling. Brought back memories of my first introduction to my more womanly desires for one of my secondary school teachers years ago. Thank you
Very pretty story. I could see a sequel being a good or a bad thing. This offering was definitely worthy of ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Lovely story. I felt like a voyeur in Alison's room, such was the intimacy you conjoured up... very arousing!
A beautifully written beginning. Looking forward to more chapters. There's a lot of potential out there...! Please, keep writing.
OMG! How come its taken me so long to rediscover you. This was glorious. I've never been to a boarding school but there were snippets in there that brought memories flooding back from my real life/.
Beautiful and highly erotic - I spotted your posts in the Beautiful Images thread and having seen "Chloe" I had to come and read your stories. I absolutely love this - five stars! Keep writing!