by NaughtyJo73
It’s an incredible story, honest and realistic (don’t know if it is or not). For me there are only two detractors, the first is a technical issue; the conversations between them seems stilted and unnatural. The second detractor is from a plot perspective, I think it’s a little bit sad that Andy and his wife are estranged.
Other than that the story is absolutely stunning, a beautiful discovery of sexuality.
Thank you so much for sharing
Tess (uk)