All Comments on 'Chocolate Dreams Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

a chapter every few years is not conducive to a decent story.

Dreamer971Dreamer971over 2 years agoAuthor

I agree! I have 4 more chapters coming.

wasagadavewasagadave5 months ago

This is the love story. It will be interesting to see how David reconciles the love he has for Dianne, with the lusty side of her sexual needs.

Great writing with lots of detail. Looking forward to the next chapter.

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