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by SleepytimeChloe

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wayneandanntriskelionwayneandanntriskelionabout 5 years ago

Very good, but too short! We need more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Where's the rest?

This story is only half done! Please, please finish it (and them).

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Repeat?

Hasn't this been posted before?? Could be wrong...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Nice quote

Nice Princess Bride quote, thanks for making me smile when I read it.

SleepytimeChloeSleepytimeChloealmost 5 years agoAuthor
Princess Bride

Thanks for catching that!! … OK, I hadn't intended to do anymore on this, but people keep wanting to know what happens next!! Should I write more??

delairiumdelairiumalmost 5 years ago
Yes please

Loved it. Would love even more of it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Scotch

One little point of clarification. Maybe someone else has mentioned it already?? A Scotch “neat” is right out of the bottle. No ice. No mix. That’s how many people drink good Scotch. I think you should write mote on this one. Very arousing.

Marklynda2Marklynda2almost 2 years ago

Ah chocolate and seduction what a combination!

Where did you say I can get some of this chocolate? Thank you for sharing your vision and talent.

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Hi! My name is Chloe, and I've been a big fan of hypnosis and mind control stories for a long time, and in the last year I've started writing them myself! Sometimes it's just erotic fiction, but mostly it's erotic hypnosis, and other mind-control type things. Male victims, fem...

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