by Westman99
I was with you until the very end. That's just me though, I like the romantic stories. I was hoping that he would at least be able to help her in some way. Oh well. It wa written well. I hope you continue to write. Maybe more along these lines of, did it happen, stories if you keep them short like this. I also see the potential of a much longer story. Overall I thought this was a job well done.