All Comments on 'Choices to be made'

by Westman99

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Newt0351Newt0351about 2 months ago

I was with you until the very end. That's just me though, I like the romantic stories. I was hoping that he would at least be able to help her in some way. Oh well. It wa written well. I hope you continue to write. Maybe more along these lines of, did it happen, stories if you keep them short like this. I also see the potential of a much longer story. Overall I thought this was a job well done.

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English Male...mature. Late 60's. I have been in two long term relationships but am now single. I have three adult children. I have been reading stories on here for a while and thought I would have a look around. Recently tried my hand at writing....happy for you to give const...