All Comments on 'Choir Collusion'

by younghrted2

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Fiona69m2Fiona69m2almost 3 years ago

I agree with bob03567 and ymmv,,,, don't let them get you down and you are super talented... "We got you KID" as someone brilliant once said...

ymmvymmvalmost 3 years ago

Revised my earlier score upward.

ymmvymmvalmost 3 years ago

I would have given it 5 but I had some difficulty tracking the plot changes. The story structure was unusually complex for erotica, and that contributed to my difficulties. I probably should have scored it more generously. I’m a scientist and I read challenging material all the time. The story was well-crafted in trendy lingo, and the author is clearly quite talented. I plan to read more of her stories soon.

bob03567bob03567almost 3 years ago

Nice story. Your on your way now. Don't let the trolls bring your down.

sp9983sp9983almost 3 years ago

Dumbest, most unrealistic thing I've ever tried to read.

cageysea9725cageysea9725almost 3 years ago

I do wish people who publish on this site would read the descriptions on the category.

I understand though. "Keeping it in the family" is a little long to read and comprehend for a lot of people.

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