All Comments on 'Chosen by the Alpha Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Exquisite!!! If you wrote the whole story and published it on Kindle, so many Addison Cain, Zoey Ellis etc fans would love it. Can't wait to read more!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Hope it will not be too long a wait for your chapter 3 and to hear more about Alessia's experiences. Beautifully written story and incredibly erotic.

FracturedMoonlightFracturedMoonlightover 1 year ago

Can't wait for the 3rd part.

kdlucaskdlucasover 1 year ago

Keep it coming!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Its a good start but maybe concentrate more on the interactions between people. Show more, tell less. Secondly, alpha’s are supposed to be sexy and dominant! Hoping there’s more to come.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

LOVE. THIS. please continue it

Bfairy95Bfairy95over 1 year ago

Can't wait for more

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