by SaucySiren93
Exquisite!!! If you wrote the whole story and published it on Kindle, so many Addison Cain, Zoey Ellis etc fans would love it. Can't wait to read more!!
Hope it will not be too long a wait for your chapter 3 and to hear more about Alessia's experiences. Beautifully written story and incredibly erotic.
Its a good start but maybe concentrate more on the interactions between people. Show more, tell less. Secondly, alpha’s are supposed to be sexy and dominant! Hoping there’s more to come.