All Comments on 'Chosen by the Alpha Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymous23 days ago

Will there be any updates?

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Ahh this is so good! Can’t wait to read more!

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Please, please ,more! This is one of the best stories I’ve read

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Oh my gods, you updated. Yes!!!

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

It's such a good story. I hope you continue with it!

Mizdrgn28Mizdrgn286 months ago

Still hoping you will write more on this story! Love the direction it’s going!!!! 😊

covertwritercovertwriter6 months ago

Thank you. Hot hot hot. And a great storyline. I keep checking back, hoping you’ll write more

Kairidarkness3427Kairidarkness34277 months ago

This was so amazing please continue best primal ever

Whitley4343Whitley43438 months ago

Noooooo, not another unfinished story!!! It's has such great potential, please please continue

hazeleys34hazeleys349 months ago

Hopefully you will continue her story. With Alessia finding her sister and getting to stay with Logan which would be awesome

WildErotica69WildErotica6910 months ago

Filthy hot sex - would have loved to read more - don’t know if you will write more

WildErotica69WildErotica6910 months ago

Filthy hot sex, I assume she did get pregnant because of Logan - would love to read more, not sure if you will write more though

EGRIEGRI12 months ago

Like all the other comments I quite liked this story and hope you continue. At this point it has been a while since your last chapter so I hope the inspiration hasn't diminished.

I would hope Alissa mentions her sister and we find out she is in fact one of the rebel leaders. Perhaps an exchange of prisoners with a covert plan to capture the general through Alissa's developed skill at self defense could help the rebels win their fight.

Lots of options out there for you. When yogurt a chance please choose one and share it with us.

TrophySlutTrophySlut12 months ago

Oh I love this!!! She gets pregnant of course, and Logan has to decide whether to take her with or return her (I think he should steal her away ;) )

daddys_baby_omegadaddys_baby_omega12 months ago

Id like a power struggle between Logan and the general for her! Wonderfull story!

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Romance with filthy sex, please

JoymacJoymacover 1 year ago

Wow! Fantastic chapter! I wonder if he’ll be mad at her for taking away his leverage with the General. Im looking forward to finding out!

ControllessControllessover 1 year ago

Can't wait for more!!

N3rdBlyssN3rdBlyssover 1 year ago

Loved it! I want her with Logan and to eventually use his training against the General. He can't hand her back now, but maybe they can work together with her knowledge of the area to help Logan free the rebel leader.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

loved this chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I want them to fall in love and have babies. I want her to be sent undercover back to the general to fuck up his life and the lives of those snooty bitches at high tea 🤣 I want them to become a power couple that rule as hard as they fuck. Is that too crazy?

Aqua317Aqua317over 1 year ago

Pregnant and with Logan, please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Pregnant and with logan

Ebwood4444Ebwood4444over 1 year ago

I am enthralled by this story. I will absolutely die if she goes back to the general.

JustBobbinAlongJustBobbinAlongover 1 year ago

Like the previous anonymous, I like Logan and his countries practices better. Logan, please!!!!

Beauty888Beauty888over 1 year ago

Mated and pregnant to Logan ! Also, reunited with her sister that has joined the rebels. As long as she stay with Logan and they fall in love, I'll be in heaven! ❤️

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I’d love to see the two fighting over her!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Its a good first story but lacks any depth between characters. I found their connection really superficial. No lingering looks, no tension.. you have them training in self defence and couldnt come up with any close encounters? How does she feel free of her general? Who is she? What fears does she have and doesnt Logan intimidate her? Are neither of them fighting a natural attraction without the heat? Probably could do with an editor 3/5

thornyrosesthornyrosesover 1 year ago

I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm intrigued by Logan and want to see more of his character

FracturedMoonlightFracturedMoonlightover 1 year ago

I very much want to see her pregnant by Logan

junoKjunoKover 1 year ago

have her kick loan's ass in training then dominate him

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Please have her end up with Logan

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Hank god for Logan, the general can go deepthroat a cactus

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I like that she was marked by not the General!!

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