All Comments on 'Christi and James'

BP451 is on my short list of good LIT authors and I'm glad to see him back. This is a well constructed piece with lots of writing craft lessons to teach. It's well told, too, right up until the last paragraph where it abruptly ends. Maybe there's a sequel planned.

"How did he find me?" well he says he kept the key she gave him. Did she know where she was going to be moving and gave him the key to a place she didn't live?

I couldn't bring myself to read anymore. Piece of shit writer who obviously can't bother to read his own drivel.