by CityWolf
Did you really mean to have this story posted in the BDSM section? It seems like nonconsent is the underlying theme and motivation of this story.
It should have been in Non-Con though. Well done anyway and please have five stars.
Consensual versus nonconsenual. Use a dictionary. At your age, you should know the difference. Reads like a twelve-year-old wrote it.
Story started wonderfully, but each step after made me like it less. I only kept reading in hopes that she would murder the group dexter-style. Also, the fear of blackmail is an enticing thought, but ending with it distributed to everyone doesn't a satisfying ending make. Also, RAPE IS NOT BDSM!
Great humiliation! And terrific ideas of helplessness...if that is a word. Keep writing, I loved it, made me totally horny!
I like to read more of this story and maybe the girls from school come back and force her in to more things plus more about what other things they had her do already!
right when you get to the funnest part, the story ends.... but I appreciate the effort!