All Comments on 'Christmas Eve'

Rarely do I offer negative criticism of stories here as it takes time and effort to write.

Just not an appealing tale.

Motive, development, and ending fail the reader.

This was a wasted three minutes!

That was great!!

I appreciate the feedback. This was a stream of consciousness story. I did attend a Christmas Eve party days ago and bumped into an old teacher I hated. He hated me too. We had a completely pleasant conversation but I did imagine in the moment, what if we went upstairs and had a nice hate-fuck right now? That was the inspiration of the story so I went home and typed it up after a lot of wine. I have more stories to tell including one already submitted. I hope you give them a chance and offer more feedback. 💋

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a near-perfect hate-fuck