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FailedscoutFailedscout12 months ago

I tried to read it all and like it but I really hate the format of bouncing back and forth between present and past, and at one point, you introduced a third timeline and then I had to stop. I was really interested in the story but just couldn't get past the format.

Thank you for writing and posting here.

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I've been writing stories since high school. I even shared a few with my yearbook teacher and got a kiss for endeavors. The stories are from real life experiences and real life fantasies. I write to images I see in day to day life, or wish I did. I hope you enjoy.