All Comments on 'Ciara Cadici Ch. 03'

Eh, I was finding this story interesting, but it's at this point where I stop. Not only this chapter is entirely asinine because why the hell would a French king go into a city to deliberately become part of the sieged, but also because of this really, really stupid duke.

He's a vassal of the French who will have him killed immediately for this, and he would know that. That by itself is ridiculous enough, but the last paragraph pushes past stupid into straight up obnoxious. What? He's going to get away with it because... What? She won't tell? They won't believe her just because it's a cheap, incongruous way to create conflict? Yeah, that's not how it worked. Specially with royalty.

Too bad, there are so few medieval fiction stories here, specially in non-con which is ripe for it.