All Comments on 'Ciara Ch. 01'

Was a good story. I like the concept of getting caught by a family member, but also the fact that they didn't bone right then and there. It teases what's to come in a good way. Makes me want to see how their next interaction goes.

I also like how you had Ciara so concerned for her cousin after he ran away, but she was so horny remembering how he came, she just had to touch herself again. Very nice.

One personal criticisms

 I never liked it when people describe themselves in third person as their title (titles like "the singer..." and r&b princess). It kinda takes away from the immersion. It might be just me, but I liked the narrative of seeing what's inside her dirty little mind, and those phrases just makes it seem like there is a narrator rather than her thoughts

Enjoyed the story