All Comments on 'Claire's Fantasies Coming True'

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DanDraperDanDraperover 2 years ago

Very good first story. There are some grammar and spelling problems but you need to work on, but other than that it was a good read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Gotta be careful with those pronouns.

"he big melons" should be "her big melons"

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

ACAB

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Loved the story. Next time claire meets a cop. She could take charge of the officer. Take control of the situation by handcuffing him then stripping him and fucking him then leaving him drained in his squad car

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