All Comments on 'Claudette Surprises Me'

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legsfeettoeslegsfeettoesalmost 2 years ago

Nice. Hot. Five stars. Wish our neighborhood were like that. There are some hot women here.

Boyd PercyBoyd Percyalmost 2 years ago

Maybe one of the wives sabotaged his car!

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Peter_ClevelandPeter_Clevelandalmost 2 years ago

A clever and interesting variation on the wife-as-poker-prize genre: there's very little reported about the play of the game itself, and sex with Jane is entirely routine and expected by all, including Jane! I like JB's idiosyncratic approach a lot. Or perhaps this is just what you should expect when you mix adult Smithies and Yalies. The revelations of Claudette's wild past were fun, too, and the final threesome/foursome was spicy.

UAlbanyGirl518UAlbanyGirl518almost 2 years ago

Quirky little story. I don’t usually read group sex stories because it’s confusing who is fucking whom, but you did a great job fleshing out all the characters to it was easy to keep track. I didn’t like that she was taped by Lou with Jim’s help, and then she gave herself to them again. Glad they both died and hope she had something to do with it! 5 stars

prinnaveaprinnaveaalmost 2 years ago

This story reminds me of Women of Park Lane just some scenery, character and ending change. The premise was the same. IMHO

theMasterBaitertheMasterBaiteralmost 2 years ago

Well written. Bitter sweet. The non con was sad, but still well done. Consent is sexy.

OGHMNWOGHMNWalmost 2 years ago

I concur that it was an interesting enjoyable hot erotic story! It a surprise that Brad didn’t know more about his wife’s past history or enjoy some of her experience. Was she be a “Good Wife” for his sake or because of her psychological damage from Lou and Jim’s abuse / rape of her? Thank You!

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